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Are You Ready for Heaven?
Contributed by
wachumiri
on
Monday, 11th August 2003 @ 06:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Once in time long gone
A Son was born to Mary
For God had sent His Son
Our burdens for to carry
Once in time long gone
Some wise men came to see Him
Following a Heavenly star
They reached Bethlehem
Once in time long gone
The Son grew up and taught
What is right and wrong
And how God’s to be sought
Once in time long gone
The people went and killed Him
But He rose- defied the grave!
And then went up to Heaven
Some day in time to come
God’s Son will come again
The wicked men God will condemn
Are YOU ready for Heaven?
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wachumiri
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2003-08-11 06:35:00]
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Re: Are You Ready for Heaven?
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by poetrygodslove on
Wednesday, 8th October 2003 @ 07:48:37 AM AEST
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| wow ! yes im ready...lets gooooooooo....enjoyed the poem..It is so nice to find other christian writers on here.so nice that GOD has so many people on this earth and yet still makes you feel you and he is the only one on earth..thanks for the write.and reading my poetry letter to god....poetrygodslove.....sandy |
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Re: Are You Ready for Heaven?
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by LEMMEN on
Tuesday, 11th October 2005 @ 05:57:06 AM AEST
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I like to read a person first post on the site and this is very well written
~DENNIS~ |
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Re: Are You Ready for Heaven?
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by lostinmyself on
Monday, 29th October 2007 @ 06:10:08 AM AEST
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You have grown, poet.
Your writing has definitely matured. But then, you were, what? 18? 17? when you wrote this? So, I guess that's natural, but still, this is a nice little poem, but it doesn't seem to have that...zing that your most recent poems have.
Anyway, it was nice to read something a little different. Nice write.
*hugs tight*
Phil xxx |
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Re: Are You Ready for Heaven?
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 7th March 2009 @ 03:11:14 AM AEST
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For some odd reason I decided to read my first poem I ever posted on this site. It is actually one of the first poems I had ever written and saved. There were a few when I was very young but I probably threw them out. Anyway, I read the comments on my first posted poem and one of them was yours. It was very nice and...very encouraging. That was nearly four years ago. I would like to thank you once again. Over the years I had forgotten that comment but now I think I'll remember it without forgetting.
Then I thought I should go and read your first posted here and I am glad I decided to do that. I really like this. In answer to the question though, I am not sure. I however, must admit that this was inspiring.
Take care,
Tim |
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