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Silver Kiss
Contributed by
PsychoticDreamz
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Monday, 11th August 2003 @ 02:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Beautiful silver
caressing my arms
leaving its tender kiss
thick beads of relief
Sometimes I want to stop
but I wont
I cant
I need the feel
I need to see my blood
to know Im still living
to show me my heart still beats
without you
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Re: Silver Kiss
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by BlackFire9786 on
Monday, 11th August 2003 @ 02:55:54 AM AEST
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Says alot in a short poem, i can relate, i've had problems w/ self-injury myself, but rhyming or not all your poems are wonderful and this is no exception! Great write!
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Re: Silver Kiss
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by knowWhat_kind on
Monday, 11th August 2003 @ 04:48:27 AM AEST
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| I actually think it is a message that you can say in so little words that I think is cool. great write |
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Re: Silver Kiss
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by jaeann on
Tuesday, 12th August 2003 @ 12:06:40 AM AEST
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| i love your wording here....beautiful silver....caressing my arms.....really profound..... |
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Re: Silver Kiss
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by bobotheclown on
Wednesday, 13th August 2003 @ 08:29:37 PM AEST
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Wow... this was amzing... most short poems could be longer but this is perfect. Great poem!
Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: Silver Kiss
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by wyrd_faerie on
Thursday, 14th August 2003 @ 06:58:43 PM AEST
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| oh wow...this is so very beautiful...i love it...incredible... |
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Re: Silver Kiss
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by Saira on
Thursday, 28th August 2003 @ 10:39:28 PM AEST
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Good starting...wonderful read. Well done!
Saira |
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