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NOT PERFECT YET!
Contributed by
robert_edgar_burns
on
Monday, 11th August 2003 @ 02:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Imagine a dimension
Where smoking was right.
And driving drunk
Gave you great might.
Where taking dope was always smart.
And it was cool to burp and fart.
Abuse would be the thing to do,
To make a woman fall in love with you.
Four letter words would be the rave.
Especially in church, to feel quite saved.
Reckless driving would be in vogue.
Because it’s true, You OWN the road!
This might sound silly,
But what the heck.
I am not perfect.
At least not yet.
This is how I feel
When I am with you.
I’m wrong no matter
What I do!
Copyright ©
robert_edgar_burns
... [
2003-08-11 02:05:00]
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Re: NOT PERFECT YET!
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by garyh on
Tuesday, 12th August 2003 @ 08:22:13 AM AEST
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i don't quite understand the meaning of this poem... do you actually do those things??????? if you do please get help......
it was a great write anyways..... |
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Re: NOT PERFECT YET!
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by jaeann on
Wednesday, 13th August 2003 @ 05:06:29 PM AEST
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| ya know what...i like this one....good rhyming.....good flow.....i like the very first line...IMMEDIATELY you've got my attention....i love the church line.....good job |
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