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a moment alive
Contributed by
arakrune
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Monday, 11th August 2003 @ 01:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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In the distance the clouds float
I stand and stare as they morph, transfixed
Like slow moving explosions in the ethereal loam
Thunderheads move into the mix
Flashes in the darkness
Rolling thunder shakes the ground
The rain descends in buckets
So loud it falls without a sound
STR
8:30pm
8-3-03
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Re: a moment alive
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by garyh on
Tuesday, 12th August 2003 @ 08:20:03 AM AEST
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| nice write... it gives a nice visual... |
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Re: a moment alive
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by jaeann on
Wednesday, 13th August 2003 @ 05:01:41 PM AEST
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flashes in the darkness.......i like that!!!
good feel!!! |
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Re: a moment alive
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by arakrune on
Wednesday, 13th August 2003 @ 10:26:52 PM AEST
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| thank you |
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Re: a moment alive
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by Wachumiri on
Wednesday, 5th October 2005 @ 07:39:17 AM AEST
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"So loud it falls without a sound"
Awesome! I loved those words. Well written piece. I was just in a thunderstorm the other day, it was amazing....
Take care.
David |
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