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Sleeping beauty
Contributed by
desertwispers
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Sunday, 10th August 2003 @ 11:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
happypoetry
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Tiny sweet fingers curled around your blanket
curly brown locks round your sweet face
sleeping so heavenly and peaceful
breathing lightly with such grace.
Lashes long and perfect such a pretty sight
just to watch you breath in and out
nestled in your dreamland sleep.
Only you can earn the name of sleeping beauty.
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2003-08-10 23:05:00]
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Re: Sleeping beauty
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by Crow on
Sunday, 10th August 2003 @ 11:45:25 PM AEST
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| oh! what a beautiful write, i love this piece, just makes my heart feel good. Crow |
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Re: Sleeping beauty
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by shelby on
Monday, 11th August 2003 @ 01:51:12 AM AEST
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I was thinking bout her after we talked the other night.This is just to sweet.
Michelle |
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Re: Sleeping beauty
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by MoonlitAngel on
Monday, 11th August 2003 @ 07:57:35 AM AEST
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Aww I love this!!! It's making me antsy to see my b/f's ex-sister-in-law's new baby girl, lol. This is just so sweet!!!
~ Moonlit |
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Re: Sleeping beauty
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by Saira on
Monday, 11th August 2003 @ 04:02:41 PM AEST
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This is very sweet and beautiful. Loved it!
Saira |
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Re: Sleeping beauty
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by NikkiMNelson on
Wednesday, 13th August 2003 @ 08:50:44 PM AEST
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What a beutiful piece..write more.
~*~NiKKi~*~ |
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Re: Sleeping beauty
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by ShadowFox on
Sunday, 20th June 2004 @ 12:20:43 PM AEST
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This is truley a beautiful piece.
-ShadowFox- |
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Re: Sleeping beauty
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by xxbreathlessx on
Saturday, 3rd July 2004 @ 08:23:28 PM AEST
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| aww that so pretty!! awesome job |
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Re: Sleeping beauty
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by Terry on
Wednesday, 21st July 2004 @ 11:39:13 AM AEST
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| This poem, to me, describes the love between a mother and her child. This poem is so beautiful. |
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Re: Sleeping beauty
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by corrupted_minds on
Tuesday, 3rd August 2004 @ 05:22:30 AM AEST
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| nice |
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