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Contributed by outsider on Monday, 12th August 2002 @ 11:50:45 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

"How do you feel..."
She asked me and "What are you thinking"
What could I say to that when
Her tears burned my hands like acid
But the real agony was the serrated knife of sorrow in my chest.
How did I feel...

I wanted to kiss her tears away but I couldn't.
I wanted to hold her so close we'd merge into one but I didn't.
I wanted to take her pain and make it mine but I didn't know how to.
Instead I said "I love you" but I don't know if it was enough.
How did I feel...
"I see things in black and white" I said, "no shades of grey"
The problems that faced us seemed small to me,
Nothing that couldn't be solved.
"I see things in many colours" she replied
And I breathed in her wisdom...
How did I feel...
I felt love for her burning so strong
I felt regret for anything I'd done wrong.
I felt pain as she was in pain
I felt I wanted to hold her again.
Angel my love for you is unchanging unending and true
Until eternity ends I will love you.

Copyright © outsider ... [ 2002-08-12 11:50:45]
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Re: Untitled (User Rating: 1 )
by Chrissie on Tuesday, 13th August 2002 @ 06:08:19 AM AEST
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I'd forgotten just what a fabulous piece this is...
Chrissie :)

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