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the next day
Contributed by
wil_ca
on
Sunday, 10th August 2003 @ 02:25:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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the window fogs up as i stare out looking into the rain
i wipe away the fog
as if i was trying to wipe away the pain
tears roll like im trying to flush it all out
the past - memories;
Ive spent days thinking about
trying to figure where i went wrong
but nothing will cure the scars -
they are destined to tag along
after i try to pick up the pieces and move on
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2003-08-10 14:25:00]
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Re: the next day
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by DrogedaRain on
Sunday, 10th August 2003 @ 05:44:19 PM AEST
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| Touching~! But how do you know that you didn't do everything right? And the other person did everything wrong? As long as you are being yourself you can't go wrong... |
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Re: the next day
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by Trisha on
Sunday, 10th August 2003 @ 10:37:38 PM AEST
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| I like this and maybe you can pick up the piece and fixs them. |
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