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Somewhere in the storm
Contributed by
crow
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Sunday, 10th August 2003 @ 10:25:00 AM in AEST
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Somewhere in the storm
a little girl cries desperate.
Her world lost to her
on this brutal night.
Frozen tears
not knowing who would help
in wide-eyed fear if you could see.
An unexpected hero for her
she catches his eye.
Her heart pounding
as the tears melt away
somewhere in the storm
her hero warms her hands. Crow
[a five year old autistic child was missing]
from "things I see in the dead of night".
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crow
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2003-08-10 10:25:00]
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Re: Somewhere in the storm
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by Ilhar on
Sunday, 10th August 2003 @ 12:05:29 PM AEST
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very strong and touching write
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Re: Somewhere in the storm
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by Saira on
Sunday, 10th August 2003 @ 08:05:27 PM AEST
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This is a beautiful and heartfelt write.
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Re: Somewhere in the storm
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by LovingWhispers on
Sunday, 10th August 2003 @ 08:20:37 PM AEST
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| Although I am not Autistic,I can so relate to the feelings in this poem...Again...another poem where we are shown the depth of your heart and soul. |
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Re: Somewhere in the storm
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by Rakerman1999 on
Sunday, 10th August 2003 @ 10:47:12 PM AEST
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I agree with LW...You do have a way to touch the heart with your writes...very well done :o)
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Re: Somewhere in the storm
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by lovingcritters on
Monday, 11th August 2003 @ 01:10:30 AM AEST
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Crow, I was that little girl, and I cried and cried, and no one ever came to my side. I could feel the emotions inside her heart.
Oh, how I wish someone like Crow could have been there to show me the love
that I didn't even know!
Crow, you have touched the crevices of my heart past.
Such loving thought, kindness, and then peace!
lovingcritters
connie
What a beautiful note in the night. Hope you have many more! |
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Re: Somewhere in the storm
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by shelby on
Monday, 11th August 2003 @ 01:38:25 AM AEST
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thankgoodness she has you that night Crow this is beautiful.
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Re: Somewhere in the storm
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by shelby on
Monday, 11th August 2003 @ 01:38:43 AM AEST
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thankgoodness she had you that night Crow this is beautiful.
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Re: Somewhere in the storm
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by jaeann on
Monday, 11th August 2003 @ 07:50:25 PM AEST
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ah.......for the love of the rescue.........to have been in her shoes.....in one moment of a past....
beautiful read
awesome deed!!!!
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