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Alone Within
Contributed by
kori31
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Sunday, 10th August 2003 @ 09:45:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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I need a *****
to scratch the itch
I feel when I close my eyes.
Yet, sex is second or maybe tenth
on my list of things to do.
Cause a kiss could dull the ache,
an embrace would let me sleep,
and love, love could set me free.
Free from the negative
thoughts I think and words I say.
A smiling face at the end of my day.
That would make me smile,
at least for a little while.
Till I'm alone again
staring back at myself,
alone,
within.
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kori31
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2003-08-10 09:45:00]
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Re: Alone Within
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by garyh on
Tuesday, 12th August 2003 @ 08:29:56 AM AEST
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| nice write... but i think the first line is kind of offending... |
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Re: Alone Within
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by kori31 on
Tuesday, 12th August 2003 @ 06:27:01 PM AEST
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| I don't intend to offend anyone but I think it's more an expression of my hurt and anger than a jab at women in general. It doesn't have to be taken so literally. And lastly that's the way it came out, it's how I feel.... |
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