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Of A Broken Heart
Contributed by
burdened
on
Sunday, 10th August 2003 @ 02:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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withered and torn by you alone,
cast away from my throne,
beaten by your words of spite,
tested strength through this night,
holding on for one last word,
keeping hope of its return,
silent moments of which to lust,
raindrops pour to hide what must,
lying still inside myself,
thoughts confided for my mind's wealth,
taken from the places I've loved,
forced to the road above,
fighting hard as I will,
nothing seems to break hate's bond still,
see me free from it's grasp...
loneliness, and it's death-paid tasks,
it doesn't belong inside of me,
i used to be so happy,
then, in disguise, it captivated me,
in the shape of a boy,
from within the soul,
it took hold of my heart,
and swallowed me whole,
now lost in this place,
where darkness feeds from me,
I need one last taste,
of what i used to be.
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burdened
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2003-08-10 02:05:00]
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Re: Of A Broken Heart
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by jaeann on
Sunday, 10th August 2003 @ 03:35:16 AM AEST
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| i'm sorry you were cast from your throne..... it's a heavy burden that broken heart......i hope it's well on it's way to a mend.....you write brilliantly.....perfect wording....i liked it... |
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Re: Of A Broken Heart
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by DrogedaRain on
Sunday, 10th August 2003 @ 04:08:54 AM AEST
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Oh, how creative broken hearts can be~! Awesome write. I am sure everyone can relate in some fashion~!
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Re: Of A Broken Heart
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by bobotheclown on
Monday, 11th August 2003 @ 08:53:57 PM AEST
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Wow this was good and very poetic. Don't worry your broken heart will heal in time. Mine always does. Keep on writin.
Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: Of A Broken Heart
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by burdened on
Saturday, 14th February 2004 @ 01:35:32 PM AEST
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hello. this is the writer.
:D
thank you guys for all of your posts.
but please...i have 101 reads on this...and only 3 comments...my last comment to this was in august.
could you please give a comment?
it makes me think you hated it...when you don't comment. |
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