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Storm
Contributed by
xxmonstahxx
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Saturday, 9th August 2003 @ 11:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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dark clouds surround me
thunder crackles in the distance
lightning brilliantly flashes
the rain tumbles down
pounding hard against the window
making the presence of the storm known
a rainbow appears close by
beautiful and serene
as the threatening weather lifts
and the sun struggles free from the clouds
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xxmonstahxx
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2003-08-09 23:35:00]
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Re: Storm
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 10th August 2003 @ 05:54:53 AM AEST
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| It appears to me, that this storm is not just of nature. But a storm of the soul! Beautiful |
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Re: Storm
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by Hiddendarkness1705 on
Sunday, 7th September 2003 @ 03:05:37 PM AEST
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One of the best short poems I've ever read....Great write
~Stacie~ |
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Re: Storm
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by Freedom88 on
Sunday, 7th September 2003 @ 08:00:03 PM AEST
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| Great poem. It's really descriptive. I like how the sun struggles free, like good pushing through evil. |
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Re: Storm
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by Kimmie_mac on
Monday, 8th September 2003 @ 03:40:36 AM AEST
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| This is a great poem. Kimmie_mac |
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