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This smile
Contributed by
gogrl
on
Saturday, 9th August 2003 @ 08:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Life hasn’t chosen who I’ve come to be inside.
I've been given this choice,
life's lessons my guide.
I love myself
and through tears and trials,
I've conquered the demons
that have threatened the miles.
I walk and reflect,
and all the while
thinking of happiness that I desire.
The miles were lonely
and the burdens heavy,
but when the time came to reflect,
on what and when or have I done that yet,
it’s not what I’ve done it is what I’ve learned.
It was then that I realized this smile I’ve earned.
Copyright ©
gogrl
... [
2003-08-09 20:35:00] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: This smile
(User Rating: 1 ) by jaeann on
Sunday, 10th August 2003 @ 02:47:11 AM AEST (User
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you did a great job........welcome to the light........ |
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Re: This smile
(User Rating: 1 ) by gogrl on
Monday, 11th August 2003 @ 02:00:23 PM AEST (User
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Thank you again :) Tough times only strengthen tough people right? Have a beautiful day! |
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Re: This smile
(User Rating: 1 ) by Jellybellyprincess on
Sunday, 7th September 2003 @ 12:54:22 PM AEST (User
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Gogrl,
I thought this poem deserved A LOT of credit.
I could totally grasp your idea that a smile is a precious gift from God. Like, that smiling is just happiness at it's purest, you know? I just wanted to let you know that I really was touched by your writing.
Keep posting!
(Oh, yeah, and check out mine too if you have a chance- "Two Pools (Kyle's Eyes)" by Jellybellyprincess)
Peace easy,
JBelly
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