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Stolen
Contributed by
GreenLady89
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Saturday, 9th August 2003 @ 02:25:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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My heart is no longer inside of me,
But laying upon the ground,
Still beating,
But not enough to keep going.
There are certain things a person cannot rob,
From my raging mind,
Some things must stay,
For me to be alive.
Take my technically prized posessions,
But do not take what you do not understand,
How can you judge,
That in which you are ignorant.
Give me back what is rightfully mine,
All I want is what I've had since birth,
The right to do what keeps me sane,
Let me be,
And it will be alright.
Copyright ©
GreenLady89
... [
2003-08-09 14:25:00]
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Re: Stolen
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by shelby on
Saturday, 9th August 2003 @ 02:48:32 PM AEST
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word spoken wisely and oh so true great job on this write
michelle |
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Re: Stolen
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by burdened on
Saturday, 9th August 2003 @ 03:09:42 PM AEST
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| This is written with raw emotion. You speak as though it were a legacy; it's brilliant. So many can gaze in awe and nod in understanding to this masterpiece. |
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Re: Stolen
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by jaeann on
Sunday, 10th August 2003 @ 12:29:26 AM AEST
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| amazing how people judge what they do not know......your words here are amazing............ |
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Re: Stolen
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 11th August 2003 @ 01:20:58 AM AEST
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| They are right you know, you write amazingly. You use words as if you own them and you are completely original. your going to be a great author some day. |
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