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Fire
Contributed by
GreenLady89
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Saturday, 9th August 2003 @ 01:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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Beneath the blazing pits of emerald fire,
Lurks love and many things of desire.
Above the coral lips of fear,
Holds those thoughts which I hold dear.
A bottomless pit of emptiness,
Is where they hold my calls of distress.
All types of solace have now vanished,
Any form of tranquillity has been banished.
Needing to escape from here,
Allowing me to let go of my fears.
I've had enough, I can't take anymore,
Someone please help me unlock this door.
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GreenLady89
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2003-08-09 13:05:00]
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Re: Fire
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by jaeann on
Sunday, 10th August 2003 @ 12:18:40 AM AEST
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| really profound.....good write.... |
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Re: Fire
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 11th August 2003 @ 01:23:49 AM AEST
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| Its like your describing my panic attacks. When everything that was once perfectly clear, blurs, leaving me unarmed and helpless. |
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Re: Fire
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Monday, 11th August 2003 @ 01:25:34 AM AEST
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| Its like your describing my panic attacks. When everything that was once perfectly clear, blurs, leaving me unarmed and helpless. |
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