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OUR CREATOR'S CARNEGIE FALL
Contributed by
lovingcritters
on
Saturday, 9th August 2003 @ 07:45:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
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My father died,
While leaves fluttered slowly
to the ground.
The music starts
I hear it's melodious sound.
Our Marvelous Creator
performs His Symphony
His Son is the Maestro,
Conducting each and every tree.
'Tis a blazing Colorful Sonata!
Red, orange, purples, yellowish green.
Each shade a different tone.
Illuminating "Aurora Borealis" scene!
Creations made only by God!
Mammoth trees like chairs.
Extend their leaves as instruments,
And little birds applaud!
Magnificent Gingko,
Separate keys for piano.
Invisible fingers play.
Adagio, staccato, and forte'
Hard durable Oak
plays "left-over" acorns,
like tamborines
Aspen eyes watch the notes.
Trembling poplar leaves,
silver shrieking piccolo,
Twisting in the breeze.
Brilliant Reds of Maple.
Antique Stradiavaris violins.
Strumming string quartet.
Orchestration 'ner forget!
Black Walnut Trumpets
bellowing elephant calls.
Wind instruments of brass.
Delicate strained glass!
Golden Willow Trombones
Sliding sounds of roar.
Deep tones of bass.
Loose leaves soar!
The Dogwood is splendid.
French horns extended.
Pine Trees watch enjoying the harmony.
Hoarding their needles......
Never letting them go free!!
Juniper Red Cedar.
Intricate fine strings
Many harps together cord....
Music played for our Lord!
Giant Sassafras,
bark is used for tea.
Bass Cello gives it's performance,
Without fee!
American Sycamore Leaves
Shapes of Bass Horn
Plays in background,
Weathering the storm!
Can you hear the cymbals?
Huge leaves of the Cottonwood.
Clashing hits to time.....
Percussions as only cymbals could!
Bass Drums keep rhythm in every tree.
Branches spontaneous release.
Brings boom after boom.
As instruments are set free!
Leaves numbering myriads,
gently float toward the earth.
Coverlets of confetti music.
Take their last bow
for all they are worth!
Awaiting a blanket of snow,
Their melodies die.....
LEAVING EMPTY CHAIRS
ACROSS THE SKY!
Created by
Cheri Cam LeBren
August 1985
Copyright ©
lovingcritters
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2003-08-09 07:45:00]
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Re: OUR CREATOR'S CARNEGIE FALL
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by norm on
Saturday, 9th August 2003 @ 10:38:51 AM AEST
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A creation of excellance..hidden for 18 years
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The only objection I could find
For I am a piano player,
An Orchestral backround might have been
for a beautiful piano prayer...
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Re: OUR CREATOR'S CARNEGIE FALL
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by jaeann on
Saturday, 9th August 2003 @ 11:04:57 AM AEST
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| he sounds like a gentleman's "truly scrumptious"........you put me right there.......the descriptions send my senses alive........makes me want to get to know the man ....his life....beautiful read!!!! |
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Re: OUR CREATOR'S CARNEGIE FALL
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by Ilhar on
Saturday, 9th August 2003 @ 11:19:15 AM AEST
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very lovely, vivid I can see and hear through your words, fall is my favorite time of the year.
Shari |
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Re: OUR CREATOR'S CARNEGIE FALL
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by desertwispers on
Saturday, 9th August 2003 @ 03:47:06 PM AEST
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Im sorry for your loss.
This poem is flowing and beautiful, fall is beautiful and calming.Thanks for sharing.
C |
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Re: OUR CREATOR'S CARNEGIE FALL
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by Saira on
Saturday, 9th August 2003 @ 07:21:45 PM AEST
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I really am sorry about your loss, Connie. May his soul rest in peace. You have described everything pretty well. This is so beautiful! Thanks!
Saira |
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Re: OUR CREATOR'S CARNEGIE FALL
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by Crow on
Saturday, 9th August 2003 @ 07:36:05 PM AEST
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| so beautiful, takes me back to my days in colorado, sorry for your loss, excelent work. Crow |
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