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AUGMENTATION
Contributed by
jaeann
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Friday, 8th August 2003 @ 05:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Violate the body
rip away the soul
make sure the work's not shoddy
leaving you un-whole.
Reasearch all the questions
write down all the lies
of all the many bastions
how many inside have died?
Change the body given you
raped of all your will
erase the past so old to rue
new life for you instilled.
Come home branded forever
your soul's in lost and found
its' search is your endeavor
new violations over the hill abound.
Words and violence penetrate the walls
you thought were there for keeps
even new little fools can fall
sin sows and then so reaps.
No scars are clearly visible
left with no small trace
atleast nothing viable
you can see behind the lace.
How long it has taken
to find her lost soul
with all in her life that's been shaken
will she ever be whole?
A struggled quest each and every day
to simply break free
now much stronger she has a say
and the light now she can see.
Copyright ©
jaeann
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2003-08-08 17:05:00]
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Re: AUGMENTATION
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by sicknivesevered on
Friday, 8th August 2003 @ 06:03:59 PM AEST
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| Good poem. I liked it. |
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Re: AUGMENTATION
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by shelby on
Friday, 8th August 2003 @ 07:52:16 PM AEST
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enjoyable write.
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Re: AUGMENTATION
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by DreamWeaver on
Friday, 8th August 2003 @ 08:38:04 PM AEST
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| Well written ... interesting poem ... Jan |
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Re: AUGMENTATION
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by Crow on
Friday, 8th August 2003 @ 11:30:27 PM AEST
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in your writing i have this image you created for me, a person haunting and worldly, wanting to absolve the past. bearing truth
very intriguing image. thats just me, i really like your work. |
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