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Death comes ripping
Contributed by
cant-skate
on
Friday, 8th August 2003 @ 11:45:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
sarcasticpoetry
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The days are dying who is supposed to cry?
The nights are falling I don’t wanna die!
My tears are howling on winter night
My leafs are holding like an autumn fight
I sold my daylight
And I bought the night
Where shadows will rule
And I have to fight
Death is my treasure
They wanna rip it apart!
Pain took my pride and defeated my trinity
Do you think I m clever enough to play eternity?
I lost my battle no chance for a war
People will be dying one by one in a raw!
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cant-skate
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2003-08-08 11:45:00]
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Re: Death comes ripping
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by hazelnut on
Friday, 8th August 2003 @ 12:14:27 PM AEST
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| truly, deeply, deliciously dark |
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Re: Death comes ripping
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by jaeann on
Saturday, 9th August 2003 @ 03:46:02 AM AEST
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| i like every word and i love how you put 'em all together........pain took my pride.....yes indeed.... |
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