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Forgotten Soul
Contributed by
PsychoticDreamz
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Thursday, 7th August 2003 @ 08:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Oh forgotten soul that drifts with the wind, how so lonesome you are
For you have been forsaken, left alone with only a sad broken heart
Tears they fall frequently along with all hopes of finding love
You never found that special other, tried to end your life; you'd had enough
Oh forgotten soul that weeps at night, Why have you been betrayed?
Why couldnt true love wander by and ever look your way?
Sorrow burdens your once happy life, along with hatred and fear
The thought hurts to think you once had someone to hold dear
Oh forgotten soul that loathes every breath she takes
Another day, another night, and still every second her heart breaks
Sadness fills your ghostly spirit, Darkness held within makes you beam
Pain within your hollowed mind makes reality seem a dream
Oh forgotten soul of mine, Please try to smile today
Cutting and crying only helps fuel the pain
Maybe someday I'll find someone to share my love with one last time
For he will have the power to mend this broken heart of mine
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PsychoticDreamz
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2003-08-07 20:05:00]
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Re: Forgotten Soul
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by DrogedaRain on
Thursday, 7th August 2003 @ 08:52:00 PM AEST
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| Oh Wow~! Tears flowed down my cheeks reading this. I would so love to give you a hug~! |
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Re: Forgotten Soul
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by DrogedaRain on
Thursday, 7th August 2003 @ 08:55:21 PM AEST
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| Oh Wow~! Tears flowed down my cheeks reading this. Very impressive yet very heart breaking. When you least expect it the one for you will be right before you~! And your heart will know the minute you lay eyes on them~! |
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Re: Forgotten Soul
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by jaeann on
Friday, 8th August 2003 @ 05:39:48 AM AEST
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| when you do find them they do have that power!!!!! beautiful read!!!! |
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Re: Forgotten Soul
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by venkat on
Friday, 8th August 2003 @ 08:36:37 AM AEST
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| Really a beautiful write.. but .. D.Rain has caused me more wonder.. |
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Re: Forgotten Soul
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by bobotheclown on
Sunday, 10th August 2003 @ 12:16:51 AM AEST
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This was good very poetic and captivating. I like how u started off each stanza. Excellent write.
Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: Forgotten Soul
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by eternityandaday4u on
Friday, 17th October 2003 @ 11:56:14 PM AEST
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| this write was awesome!!!!! It gave me chills. i hope that you find some one to mend yor broken heart!! i cried as i read this, it was gripping. i couldn't stop reading it. i read it about 10 times |
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