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Year Round
Contributed by
daniel
on
Thursday, 7th August 2003 @ 03:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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soon, there will be no more day to day
soon, we'll run around towns not so plain
but what about right now?
can't look up from the ground
i'm buried face first in the face of the man-pound
caged in by circumstance
it's not a sweet romance
but i'm willing to work it if you give me the chance
not quite a night on the town...
well this is living year round...
hey now would you want a little bit of me to spare?
pack me up in a bag picked up to go any and everywhere
there's really nothing i can offer to give for you to wear
can't even take me but you have me packaged still with care
not quite a night on the town...
well this is living year round...
we're waiting on one and a million
i'd be hard-pressed to guess
how much passed that we're seeing
but that's okay for now i guess
patience for the day seems stillborn
but it thrives you'll see forthright
living year round tears me up more
for today i think i'll be just fine
give me the chance, i'll take this dance some
where we can finally get away
take the chance, you'll make this last some
more than another day
hey now would you want a little bit of me to spare?
pack me up in a bag picked up to go any and everywhere
there's really nothing i can offer to give for you to wear
can't even take me but you have me packaged still with care
not quite a night on the town...
well this is living year round...
what is year round? what is the day?
same as every other one without you here
so i go for today and then another day
hoping to get out of this round year
i think that we should chance this
well would you want to romance this?
(for those who don't know, on average
i see this girl about once a month for a
weekend... if i'm lucky!)
Copyright ©
daniel
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2003-08-07 15:05:00]
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Re: Year Round
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by jaeann on
Thursday, 7th August 2003 @ 05:47:12 PM AEST
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| heartwrenching....pleading...i hope you get to be with her more often ...soon....i hope she knows.... |
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Re: Year Round
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by DrogedaRain on
Thursday, 7th August 2003 @ 07:39:10 PM AEST
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| Wow~! I am lost for words. |
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Re: Year Round
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Thursday, 7th August 2003 @ 08:58:00 PM AEST
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| How could she resist this? so beautiful and honest... awesome write. :) |
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