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Seasons change
Contributed by
cant-skate
on
Thursday, 7th August 2003 @ 07:45:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Patriotic
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We faced a winter where
Every night the moon asked why
The tears of heaven
Where raging bombs
We lived a winter where
The sun asked bout the identity
Of each and every gun
We survived a winter where
Killing was only
A ride through our parks
We wrote a chapter
Of our history with
Ink of blood
But soon the seasons will change
I see a spring
In which prosperity will shine
And green color will draw our peace of mind
I feel a summer in which
The sun will rule our skies freely
With no clouds to affect it
I see… the change is near!
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cant-skate
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2003-08-07 07:45:00]
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Re: Seasons change
(User Rating: 1 )
by norm on
Thursday, 7th August 2003 @ 11:15:50 AM AEST
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Your poem is good but I have a problem
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I'd like to know with what reference,
your poem is intended? |
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Re: Seasons change
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by jaeann on
Thursday, 7th August 2003 @ 05:10:21 PM AEST
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intention
was mentioned
what a beautiful write.........
change is near
that 's all i hear
i love your words on this site..... |
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