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Uncertain
Contributed by
ELPsycho
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Thursday, 7th August 2003 @ 04:25:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
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A broken tree on a hill
that still lives.
And the flowers even more sweet
the fruits sweeter still.
A broken tree that still lives.
A broken man on a ledge
memories from a broken dream.
And the hopes dashed on a rock bed.
And his heart shattered to pieces still.
He whispered to his ear...
A broken tree can still live.
Yet I am human and know not how to breathe.
Yet I am human and know not how to live.
I stand at the edge
and I begin to feel fear.
I stand at the edge...
Where do I go from here???
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ELPsycho
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2003-08-07 04:25:00]
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Re: Uncertain
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 7th August 2003 @ 04:56:42 AM AEST
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Back.The only place to go...back to give it another try or else back to try the next bend in the road ...or the one after that...and then take a right turn and don't look back.
Your poem was totally fantastic,profound and sad too.
I loved it!
Best wishes always
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Kay. |
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Re: Uncertain
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 7th August 2003 @ 04:57:07 AM AEST
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Back.The only place to go...back to give it another try or else back to try the next bend in the road ...or the one after that...and then take a right turn and don't look back.
Your poem was totally fantastic,profound and sad too.
I loved it!
Best wishes always
from
Kay p m-devenish |
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Re: Uncertain
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by jaeann on
Thursday, 7th August 2003 @ 04:41:24 PM AEST
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| back away..........look away...........make new dreams come true...... |
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Re: Uncertain
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Friday, 8th August 2003 @ 11:49:07 PM AEST
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Excellent flowing poem, full of feeling and meaning.
There isnt much I can say to change what you feel so I wont.
There is to much darkness in my heart, so what ever I said to make you feel better, may prove false and unkind.
But I know the edge, as inviting as it is is it really the way to go?
Best I can do sorry. |
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