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Hurt You
Contributed by
jaz17
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Thursday, 7th August 2003 @ 01:05:00 AM in AEST
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I knew you too well
Knew how to hurt the most
Said things I didnt mean
Spoke that I hadnt thought
I crossed the line
Felt pain but no control
Ripped out your heart
Watched as you cried
I was rightous
You were in the wrong
I knew enough had been said
I kept going
Your terror inside
I blamed you for
I used what hurt
I made you cry
You were my best friend
Yet I convinced me I was right
I didnt even miss you
Wish we never had the fight
Now realise I was wrong
Took me all these years
Knew you too well
Used your inner most fears
Cant take back words
Never rewind time
Wish I never spoke
Those words which werent mine
Impossible for you to believe
I said yet didnt mean
Love, hurt and jealousy
Manifest, leaving the strangest things
Love you girl
I always will
Never forget
But such regret
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Re: Hurt You
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by MoonlitAngel on
Thursday, 7th August 2003 @ 06:49:05 AM AEST
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This flows wonderfully!! Each line just sort of melds into the next... Excellent! I love it! Great job, keep it up!
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Re: Hurt You
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by jaeann on
Thursday, 7th August 2003 @ 04:14:42 PM AEST
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| never rewind time.....it's comforting to know that you still love her after all this time....puts a warm feeling inside me ......i like your flow of voice here........ |
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Re: Hurt You
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by wyrd_faerie on
Friday, 8th August 2003 @ 05:07:24 PM AEST
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| wow...this is very good... |
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Re: Hurt You
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by bobotheclown on
Friday, 8th August 2003 @ 05:45:53 PM AEST
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very well written sounds like me and something I did to one of my dear friends...
Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: Hurt You
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by Chrissylee on
Monday, 11th August 2003 @ 07:33:36 AM AEST
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| I'm sure as you wrote these words she could feel in her heart just how sorry you really are for what happened way back then... so don't have regrets just treasure the good times you were able to have back then |
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