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Winter Rain
Contributed by
-FOX-
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Wednesday, 6th August 2003 @ 09:35:00 PM in AEST
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It's hard to breath
She feels so weak
She reaches out
But cannot speak
She hurts so much
No one knows why
They're all so quiet
She tries not to cry
She used to be happy
She used to be free
Now pain is the only
Thing she can see
They say she'll be fine
That it's just a phase
She's lost and alone
In lifes harsh maze
She cries silent tears
Filled with pain
Constantly falling
Like the winter rain
They can't understand
Why she hurts so
They're always with her
But they still don't know
They know that she loved him
But why did she fall
What they didn't understand
Is that he was her all
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2003-08-06 21:35:00]
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Re: Winter Rain
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by MoonlitAngel on
Thursday, 7th August 2003 @ 06:16:53 AM AEST
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Oh wow... this really touched me. Sometimes people just don't see just how much someone is affected by something, even if they're always there. It's just the way it is. No one on this earth will ever know exactly how any other person feels about any one thing because they're not that person. That's all it comes down to. Deeply touching write.
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Re: Winter Rain
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by jaeann on
Thursday, 7th August 2003 @ 02:52:58 PM AEST
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| sometimes the clues we give are not heeded.... beautiful flow of words.......... |
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