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One Look In Her Eyes....
Contributed by
-FOX-
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Wednesday, 6th August 2003 @ 08:35:00 PM in AEST
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One look in her eyes
Reveals her core
You try to turn
But still want more
The fatal attraction
Captures your soul
You try to leave
But have no control
She's the girl
That will break your heart
The one that will slowly
Tear you apart
She pulls away
When you hold her hand
She tells you why
But you don't understand
You try to tell her
That she's your all
Little did you know
She'd make you fall
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Re: One Look In Her Eyes....
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 6th August 2003 @ 09:17:08 PM AEST
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| nice poem, good flow look foward to more |
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Re: One Look In Her Eyes....
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by jaeann on
Thursday, 7th August 2003 @ 04:08:45 AM AEST
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| nice flow of words..... |
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Re: One Look In Her Eyes....
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by Merry on
Sunday, 14th September 2003 @ 09:39:58 PM AEST
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nice work - well written- enjoyed reading your poem
merry |
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Re: One Look In Her Eyes....
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by 2bpositive on
Monday, 8th November 2010 @ 10:30:28 AM AEST
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Very well written and balanced.
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