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Hollow Spirit
Contributed by
jaeann
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Wednesday, 6th August 2003 @ 12:45:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Tell her how you both belong while feeling so ripped apart?
How can you forge ahead in strength when there's no where to start?
Who'll be there to pick up pieces as you fall aside?
Why work for tomorrow when it's so much easier to hide?
She starts to see the eyes of change the way it's always been.
You cannot tell her different she's well aware the spoils of sin.
They beg and beg to be let in, to conquer that great wall.
But as soon as they see the darkness they back away as she falls.
They'll get a glimpse of the stormy sea and brush it off like sand.
They'll never reach the wounded one, she lost her place to land.
She's been left bruised and chaotic, running for the bridge.
She'll not make it there on time, her mind left it unhinged.
A wish to run away somehow somehwere soon.
Make it all just disappear and sleep beside the moon.
She senses you are leaving her, if not in body than in mind.
Although she doesn't really blame you because that sort of love she'll never find.
She aches for the day she can be complete for you, a day unlikely to come.
If she sees your back too many times, she'll shut down, run away stunned.
She's never come this close to living and daily tallying the score.
Wondering if the cracking pressure will rush the water to the shore.
Don't fret, she'll never truly leave, just die a little every day.
She knows she can never break the code because then you'll never stay.
All at once she felt so very loved with little girl dreams of blue.
But now evil's raising up again and she hasn't any clues.
How to love you and trust herself to resolve and to win.
To love her unconditionally and wash away her sins.
Copyright ©
jaeann
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2003-08-06 12:45:00]
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Re: Hollow Spirit
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by PsychoticDreamz on
Wednesday, 6th August 2003 @ 04:03:39 PM AEST
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This was beautifully written, the flow of words just seems to role off my tongue when read..I really like 'She aches for the day she can be complete for you, a day unlikely to come.' Reminds me of what Im going through now. Astonishing poem..Loved it
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Re: Hollow Spirit
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by bobotheclown on
Wednesday, 6th August 2003 @ 11:00:18 PM AEST
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Why work for tomorrow when it's so much easier to hide?
So very true indeed. I loved this great poem you captured everything so perfectly and got across your message. Awesome poem.
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Re: Hollow Spirit
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by venkat on
Thursday, 7th August 2003 @ 03:44:19 AM AEST
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| this is a great poem.. deep feelings touched my heart...thanks for sharing this beautifully written poem.. venkat |
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Re: Hollow Spirit
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by Crow on
Thursday, 7th August 2003 @ 04:10:35 AM AEST
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| hi! i had a friend, that was afraid to tell me what was behind her it might end or dampen the friendship we had. this reminds me of her, bless her soul. come to find out her past was no darker than mine. i think there is a hope in this poem, good write. Crow |
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Re: Hollow Spirit
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by ravenfire on
Tuesday, 19th August 2003 @ 04:44:47 PM AEST
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| Jesus loves you unconditionally and he washes away sins. |
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Re: Hollow Spirit
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by faith_my_eyes on
Friday, 20th February 2004 @ 05:27:01 PM AEST
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this is so beautifully written
God bless |
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