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Absent Slumber
Contributed by
jaeann
on
Wednesday, 6th August 2003 @ 11:25:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Sleep never comes.
Not really.
A whirlwind of events in an ever changing
backdrop of voices....
Garbled, yet clear.
With conversations I have no place in even
with the "two-minute rule".....
Colorful visions of a constant playback of
misunderstood events ....
Over and over...
The same and different.
Choosing another door each time....
I walk,
I fly,
I run,
I float there but not truly.
Awake....... but not at all.
Always at a loss for words.
Always lost.....
Never found.....
And sleep does not come.
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jaeann
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2003-08-06 11:25:00]
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Re: Absent Slumber
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by juliette on
Wednesday, 6th August 2003 @ 12:31:19 PM AEST
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My doggie, "Chipper Jones"got hit by a car and died about a month ago and I started working overnight soon thereafter - anyway - Do you know I have probably slept a total of two hours a night cince July 5th and some nights not even that! I guess I'm trying to say I feel ya!
I couldn't sleep at first because my doggy slept on my feet and kept them warm.
RIP
CHIPPER JONES - THE BEST DOGGIE EVER |
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Re: Absent Slumber
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by venkat on
Thursday, 7th August 2003 @ 03:53:57 AM AEST
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| These states will cause loss of energy....one of my poet friends requested me to show some solusion...for that person I wrote a poem.."Dream charm"..if you desire you may read atleast to enjoy it..venkat |
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Re: Absent Slumber
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by bobotheclown on
Friday, 8th August 2003 @ 06:59:14 PM AEST
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This sounds like something I wrote a few years back. You created some good confusing images in this.
Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: Absent Slumber
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 9th August 2003 @ 10:02:14 PM AEST
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| ahhh... but such vivid images you have written here:) hugs n' love nessa |
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