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WRONG SIDE OF THE DAY
Contributed by
jaeann
on
Wednesday, 6th August 2003 @ 10:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
sarcasticpoetry
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STUPID LITTLE SONG
CAUGHT UP IN MY HEAD
SOMETHIN' 'BOUT THE FISHIES
SWIMMIN' IN A SHALLOW BED
STUPID DAY GONE WRONG
CAUGHT BEHIND A RED
SWIRLING LIGHTS BEHIND ME
MUST BE SOMETHIN' I DID
STUPID SIAMESE CHARLEY CAT
LOVE HIM MORE THAN LIFE ITSELF
WILL LOSE HIS NINTH LIFE LEFT
IF HE DOESN'T STAY OFF MY SHELF
STUPID KIDS AND HUBBY
LISTEN TO NOTHIN' I SAY
NOTHIN'S MADE FOR DINNER, SO THERE!
I WASN'T HUNGRY ANYWAY
STUPID LITTLE POEM
CAUGHT UP IN MY HEAD
PLEASE DON'T BOTHER ME TODAY
I'M HIDING IN MY BED.
Copyright ©
jaeann
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2003-08-06 10:05:00] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: WRONG SIDE OF THE DAY
(User Rating: 1 ) by LovingWhispers on
Wednesday, 6th August 2003 @ 10:32:19 AM AEST (User
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The word stupid was really emphasised in this.Not by punctuation but by the whole "arghhhh" feeling of the poem..And WOW!! I can sooo relate lol..Well said and dont you feel better its off your chest??:) well..at least sorta lol.Tomorrow will be better;) |
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Re: WRONG SIDE OF THE DAY
(User Rating: 1 ) by LovingWhispers on
Wednesday, 6th August 2003 @ 10:32:20 AM AEST (User
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The word stupid was really emphasised in this.Not by punctuation but by the whole "arghhhh" feeling of the poem..And WOW!! I can sooo relate lol..Well said and dont you feel better its off your chest??:) well..at least sorta lol.Tomorrow will be better;) |
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Re: WRONG SIDE OF THE DAY
(User Rating: 1 ) by LovingWhispers on
Wednesday, 6th August 2003 @ 10:32:24 AM AEST (User
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The word stupid was really emphasised in this.Not by punctuation but by the whole "arghhhh" feeling of the poem..And WOW!! I can sooo relate lol..Well said and dont you feel better its off your chest??:) well..at least sorta lol.Tomorrow will be better;) |
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Re: WRONG SIDE OF THE DAY
(User Rating: 1 ) by Ramfire on
Wednesday, 6th August 2003 @ 10:46:36 AM AEST (User
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Methinks I see some humor in thy poem.
I like your style alot.
Regards,
Ramfire |
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Re: WRONG SIDE OF THE DAY
(User Rating: 1 ) by juliette on
Wednesday, 6th August 2003 @ 12:39:19 PM AEST (User
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Don't kill me but I'm laughing! Love this - think I'll print it and hang it on the fridge!
(smile) Good write!!
juliette |
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