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Crow...
Contributed by
LovingWhispers
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Wednesday, 6th August 2003 @ 09:25:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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Howling winds across the plains,carry wild cries of sorrow
I stand here in my woollen wrap,and shed a tear for my tomorrow
For the voice of this mysterious land,will never be the same
As the "crow" takes flight and returns, from where he once came
I will miss his gaze of curious eyes,as I pen my every thought
Watching as my time unfolds,with a gift to me he's brought
The kindness of his friendship,was always in my smile
As I would pause to watch in awe,words he penned across the miles
Yet today as I stand searching,listening the the winds of time
I do not see his wisdom,or the friend I thought was mine
There's a coldness in the air this morn',chilling to the bone
My only hope within my heart,is that the "crow" won't fly alone
GREAT SPIRIT if he must spread his wings,and leave without a trace
Guide him safely through his journey,and keep a smile upon his face
With a heart of canyons deep,he truly cared for all he touched
And GREAT SPIRIT,if you speak to him,Let him know I'll miss him...
" very much"
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LovingWhispers
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2003-08-06 09:25:00]
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Re: Crow...
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by Ilhar on
Wednesday, 6th August 2003 @ 10:32:43 AM AEST
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Crow will be sorely missed by me as well...this is a wonderful expression of that loss to this site...good write
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Re: Crow...
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 6th August 2003 @ 10:54:28 AM AEST
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| blessings to him from me too, i can only hope he returns to us all here, this is absolutely beautiful sharon:) hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Crow...
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by Saira on
Wednesday, 6th August 2003 @ 01:38:39 PM AEST
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This is breathtakingly beautiful LovingWhispers. Crow will be immensely missed by me as well. So far what I have come to know him from his wonderful writes, he is such a dear and caring person.
Saira
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Re: Crow...
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by jaeann on
Wednesday, 6th August 2003 @ 03:45:54 PM AEST
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| LovingWhispers......i love your work...so heartfelt!!!! i too.....will miss this voice.....i'm new......but Crow was unique....."right on"....and one of the few who actually "got it!!".....that voice needs to be here....... |
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Re: Crow...
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Thursday, 7th August 2003 @ 02:36:14 AM AEST
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Lovely write, as always, Whispers....
Jenni
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Re: Crow...
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by lovingcritters on
Thursday, 7th August 2003 @ 03:42:28 PM AEST
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Heartwrenching.....wrung dry.....so sad, so lovely....he's going to miss you too!
lovingcritters |
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Re: Crow...
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by shelby on
Friday, 8th August 2003 @ 08:02:30 PM AEST
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this is beautiful and Ill be missing him also.Hoping he will be back he was only here a short time
michelle |
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Re: Crow...
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by PoloRM on
Saturday, 16th August 2003 @ 01:12:19 AM AEST
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| Simply beautiful and sweet. Great write =) |
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