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A Broken Life
Contributed by
Fenril(_a.k.a_ZTAP)
on
Wednesday, 6th August 2003 @ 08:45:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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A life wasted in autumn’s leaves,
A life yearning the roses scent,
A life wanting to caress the stars,
A life wishing to live
After winter’s gone away,
The seed of my spirit fragile it stands,
Looming and growing deep in the frost of my heart.
Sweet pain, foster my tears
A passion lost, a sorrow redeem
A fragile memory forgot
A broken shard found
A hearts that stands wound
A stain in the soul profound
Time flows so fast
And our souls drift far far away,
To live a life like this
To be doom to see only what could be,
Blind always to what it is.
A life dreaming a perfect past,
A life remembering the future lost,
The memories now turn to dust
To live only to die again,
To rise only to fall again
To find only to lose again
A Paradise lost
Heaven’s denied
To burn… To burn…
…why does it hurt
The dark... the dark...
…a mourning heart
Can you hear it...
…the reaper calls my name
The night fade and I awake....
…to death ...to death
I will die for your sins...
…to forgive you
...to redeem you
But will you…
…cry for me?
…pray for me?
…wait for me?
Will you ever remember…
…that once I existed?
Copyright ©
Fenril(_a.k.a_ZTAP)
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2003-08-06 08:45:00]
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Re: A Broken Life
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by jaeann on
Wednesday, 6th August 2003 @ 03:40:29 PM AEST
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| so heartwrenching.....a very well done piece...i like the line...."a life dreaming a perfect past......" i think we all wonder what that would be like!!!! |
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Re: A Broken Life
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by bobotheclown on
Friday, 8th August 2003 @ 06:11:37 PM AEST
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wow this was good. The pause things really added to the emotion of the poem. Great write!
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