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Origin of the elders
Contributed by
LaMaGrA
on
Wednesday, 6th August 2003 @ 01:25:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
mythology
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The ground of the forest hid something under
A huge heart that had the sound of thunder
Humans, animals, trees and spirits were scared
From that giant that straight at their souls stared
A curious fool mouse seeked daring danger
Forgetting he was to that heart a stranger
He bit in rage to discover a taste
A taste that left him behind years of waste
That creature was doomed to live in darkness
Having wings grown, becoming symbol of sadness
The mouse became a bat that was cursed forever
"Would I see the Sun again?", it cried. No..never...
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2003-08-06 01:25:00]
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Re: Origin of the elders
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by sicknivesevered on
Wednesday, 6th August 2003 @ 01:37:10 AM AEST
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| Haha, well isn't that screwed up. Interesting write. |
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Re: Origin of the elders
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by jaeann on
Wednesday, 6th August 2003 @ 03:41:44 AM AEST
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| "a huge heart".......... i like that line...... |
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Re: Origin of the elders
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 6th August 2003 @ 11:01:19 AM AEST
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| i love bats, and i love this poem:) warm welcome to ypdc too, hugs n' love nessa |
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