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Be Alive
Contributed by
dafremen
on
Wednesday, 6th August 2003 @ 12:45:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Be Alive
R. Dafremen
So this is alive
Clinging to
This tender vine
Playful zephyr
Warm sunshine
Feels alive
So this is alive
Around I cast
A wandering eye
Breath the air
That passes by
Sing a song
That fills my mind
Smile a smile
Then look outside
See the truth
Enjoy the lies
Feel the love
Of open skies
Embracing me
The earth that cries
Be alive
So this is alive
A chance to ask
To wonder why
The breeze through leaves
A rustled sigh
We're alive.
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dafremen
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2003-08-06 00:45:00]
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Re: Be Alive
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by sicknivesevered on
Wednesday, 6th August 2003 @ 01:31:04 AM AEST
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| "enjoy the lies" I guess that's the only thing to do. Nice poem. |
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Re: Be Alive
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by jaeann on
Wednesday, 6th August 2003 @ 03:38:42 AM AEST
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| i love that line...."See the truth enjoy the lies"..... good read |
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Re: Be Alive
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by LovingWhispers on
Wednesday, 6th August 2003 @ 07:04:45 AM AEST
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| errr Sorry..I cant choose a favourite line ..I enjoyed every one of them... ;) Again you get my thinking spot into action :) Nice one! |
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Re: Be Alive
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by Crow on
Thursday, 7th August 2003 @ 11:08:22 PM AEST
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| i like the nature of this poem, Crow |
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Re: Be Alive
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by Crow on
Thursday, 7th August 2003 @ 11:11:33 PM AEST
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| i like the nature of this poem, Crow |
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