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Hate, Stab, Cry, Repeat
Contributed by
Cancer
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Tuesday, 5th August 2003 @ 10:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
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at first, so in love
undaunted by the task at hand
young love building a Garden of Delight
creating our own wonderland
but, you've brought others to our palace
when i'm away, our bed is still full
phallic serpents of deceit
have seen the pale flesh of your inner thigh
(oh god, my head hurts)
enjoy this one, he'll be your last
HATE, STAB, CRY, REPEAT
HATE, STAB, CRY, REPEAT
hate, stab, cry, repeat
this time, this girl
i'm not so much in love
learned to hold back
taught not to trust
so i isolate myself
and she doesn't seem to mind
she doesn't like my face
so i take her from behind
my money's all that matters
my house, and my car
and when i am asleep at night
she's out at the bar
i give, she takes, i give some more
my head is hurting again
HATE, STAB, CRY, REPEAT
HATE, STAB, CRY, REPEAT
hate, stab, cry, repeat
so many times
this cycle repeated
so many times
i see the same smiling lies
so many times
i wonder why
i guess i was the problem all along
turning the cycle inward
i finish what i started
HATE, STAB, CRY, REPEAT
HATE, STAB, CRY, REPEAT
HATE, STAB, CRY, REPEAT
hate, stab, die
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2003-08-05 10:05:00]
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Re: Hate, Stab, Cry, Repeat
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by hardcoreputa on
Tuesday, 5th August 2003 @ 12:29:06 PM AEST
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| wow... i am kinda speachless, an excellent write, i too have done self harm for many of the same reasons(as well as very diff reasons too) keep writting these awsome poems ~Apryl |
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Re: Hate, Stab, Cry, Repeat
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by jaeann on
Tuesday, 5th August 2003 @ 08:43:26 PM AEST
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| you have an excellent voice.........your display of words to convey the hurtful ravages that lies can bring...........awesome!!!! |
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Re: Hate, Stab, Cry, Repeat
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by Jason_Robert_Britt on
Thursday, 7th August 2003 @ 05:47:42 AM AEST
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| Your layout on this one, and the plot twist in the end was really refreshing... love the theme and the way it flows... A+++ |
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