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wanna make love to you

Contributed by wassim on Tuesday, 5th August 2003 @ 06:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

steps of life needs to follow
but needs a caution from any shadow
comes from heart brakers you know
cruel world and life there is......so
follow your heart and go

to our old days when we used to watch
every day the sun set we used to catch
but every changing we need to scratch

only the heart shows you all the memories
when you will feel his painfull beats
it burns the blood not some cheats
above my body tempetcher feeling the heats
all my preches memories it keeps
for every emotion the sol needs

like a new reality created by a new day
forgetting all the past...? girl no way
the only thing that my heart needs to say
all this precher on my sholders you have lay

this pain will over come
it's like a ordinary feeling to some
but it's golden memories cluless to dump

i beat it all from my mind
demise like the stone singed
to our direction over the mountains climped

you can see it if you only feel
like a fortchen weel
show me the options of life to deal

but i have chosen this road
a little romantic and really old
as i walk to you feeling so cold

you showed me i was very wrong
that you will never dump me your dong
a permeted answer and you come

back to me a new day was born
yellow like the sun i can feel it soon

Copyright © wassim ... [ 2003-08-05 06:05:00]
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Re: wanna make love to you (User Rating: 1 )
by MoonlitAngel on Wednesday, 6th August 2003 @ 05:01:31 AM AEST
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"but i have chosen this road
a little romantic and really old
as i walk to you feeling so cold"

I absolutely adore that stanza! Great job, very beautiful write.

~ Moonlit

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