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I Await You...
Contributed by
LovingWhispers
on
Monday, 4th August 2003 @ 09:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Immersed in loves conception,tender waves of desire's rush
My arousal's softly strummed,by the mere thought of your touch
I await you in candlelit corridors,of my insatiable appetite
Wishing you could join my skin,in this bubblebath tonight
Sensual scents of exotic oils,caress my senses deep within
To dance there with my very soul,as new fantasies begin
Candle wax is dripping,falling back to whence it came
And too my heart is melting,may it never be the same
For I love you with the colours,and the essence of my being
And if not for all your wonder,my breath would have no meaning
Inhaling and exhaling..lustful sighs escape my moistened lips
My mouth it yearns and hungers,for the soothing of your kiss
Come to me my lover...my poet...my desire
Let me bathe you over,with the tongue of passion's fire
Immersed in loves conception,tender waves of desire's rush
My arousal's softly strummed,by the mere thought of your touch
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Re: I Await You...
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 4th August 2003 @ 09:40:29 PM AEST
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| woo! woo! this is sexy, everyone will give you straight a`s on this piece. i`m off to that cold shower now! very good write, Crow |
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Re: I Await You...
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by Ilhar on
Monday, 4th August 2003 @ 10:17:51 PM AEST
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sensual, romantic, a classic symphony of loves desires
Shari |
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Re: I Await You...
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by xxmonstahxx on
Monday, 4th August 2003 @ 10:46:19 PM AEST
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| beautifully written |
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Re: I Await You...
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by lovingcritters on
Monday, 4th August 2003 @ 11:39:21 PM AEST
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Dear LovingWhispers, This poem certainly lives up to your name.
How touching, loving, anticipating, romantic, and desirable your words are! They marched right off your page into my heart....now it's strumming, 66.....but I can remember...thanks for reminding me!
Lovingcritters
Connie Sue |
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Re: I Await You...
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by PoloRM on
Tuesday, 5th August 2003 @ 12:48:55 AM AEST
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wonderful poem.
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The way you made me melt
You now have strapped a belt
For my rear now on my seat
Is glued thanks to the heat.
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Re: I Await You...
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by venkat on
Tuesday, 5th August 2003 @ 02:43:01 AM AEST
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Omg..what a wonderful wordpainting..poem is very beautiful and appealing. I agree with the comments of Sharon(ilhar) cent per cent.
venkat |
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Re: I Await You...
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 5th August 2003 @ 09:40:48 AM AEST
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| oh! sharon! i love this poem! i love it!!!!!sensuous, loving and classy just like the poetess:) hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: I Await You...
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by Lone_er on
Tuesday, 5th August 2003 @ 08:49:42 PM AEST
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Overwhelming my imagination
Urging my heart in subtle persuasion
You have engendered a flame
Relentless in it's pursuit of Romance !
~~ Well done maam~~~~~ Russ |
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Re: I Await You...
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 5th August 2003 @ 09:23:43 PM AEST
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I read these words you have penned....and my heart surges. I feel the love in every line. You are the queen of romance .
If I knew you better I would lay roses at your feet ;o) |
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Re: I Await You...
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by Rakerman1999 on
Monday, 11th August 2003 @ 02:47:40 PM AEST
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agian and again I am drawn to this poem...it give me such a peace in my heart to know it is I that you await ,as I await you my sweet.
Forever casting roses at your feet, Larry |
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