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Portrait Of Soul...
Contributed by
LovingWhispers
on
Monday, 4th August 2003 @ 07:45:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Moonlight sprays and falls through trees,to dance upon the face
Of she who stands before herself,searching innocence and grace
Wearing no more than the whispers,of a cool evenings soft breeze
Self portrait before a mirror,yet not merely herself she sees
Listening ever closely,she takes in the rythmic call
Of the rustling Autumn leaves,as to the earth they gently fall
All about her presence,twinkling stars twirl from the sky
To rest so near her quietness,and then so sweetly sigh
Through her locks of chocolate brown,upon her skin so bare
The evening breeze sends forth its kiss,yet she is unaware
For there within the mirror,reflected in the glass of mist
Beckons he who holds her heart and owns her every kiss
Pondering the image,amazed,she falters in her dance
To step a little closer,and capture with her brush, romance
'Tis there before her very eyes,love so pure and whole
For there within the mirror,floats the sharer of her soul
He who holds her every dream,the one who blesses her with smiles
Has come to her this moonlit night,to be near her for a while
Far across the oceans blue,a distance much further than the eye
Yet he has only journeyed as far as her breath becomes a sigh
For he came from deep inside her,from her yearnings there within
And dewdrops held the traces of where his lips had touched her skin
Her canvas still sits empty,though her heart is full and whole
As so lovingly she gazes.......into the reflection of her soul
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LovingWhispers
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2003-08-04 19:45:00]
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Re: Portrait Of Soul...
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by Saira on
Monday, 4th August 2003 @ 08:53:05 PM AEST
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This is very beautiful. Loved it!
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Re: Portrait Of Soul...
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 4th August 2003 @ 09:02:08 PM AEST
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| man! you are such a beautiful writer, you just take me on such a journey with words. i love reading your work. Crow |
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Re: Portrait Of Soul...
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by Ilhar on
Monday, 4th August 2003 @ 10:21:07 PM AEST
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breathtaking, so very beautiful, your talent is amazing
Shari |
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Re: Portrait Of Soul...
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by lovingcritters on
Monday, 4th August 2003 @ 11:48:14 PM AEST
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LovingWhispers,
How very senuous. You are telling from your heart, and from every pore. You are very much in love....open every door! Only a person in love could possibly put it down so exquisitely and help us feel it with you!
Just lovely, Just lovely.
Enjoyed every minute of it!
loving critters
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Re: Portrait Of Soul...
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by PoloRM on
Tuesday, 5th August 2003 @ 12:39:54 AM AEST
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If this is the case to it is to be
I'd want you not your love, to ever see
He brings you such inspiration from across the sea
And to most your poems he is the key!!!!!
How sad it would be for Paul-Remy
And to all the YPDC family
If you stopped writing your poetry
I'm sure, I'm sure they all agree!!
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nah, nothing should stop in the way of love like this, not even poetry. But hope you never stop writing! Lovely poem, as always!
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Re: Portrait Of Soul...
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by venkat on
Tuesday, 5th August 2003 @ 02:32:58 AM AEST
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| Really breath taking.. beautifully done. venkat |
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Re: Portrait Of Soul...
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by pacific on
Tuesday, 5th August 2003 @ 03:46:56 AM AEST
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Beautiful piece and brilliantly written. It isn't easy to maintain a rhyming piece without losing something along the way.
Lovely piece. |
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Re: Portrait Of Soul...
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by DreamWeaver on
Tuesday, 5th August 2003 @ 06:50:35 AM AEST
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| This one touched me in ways I can't explain ... tenderly written ... I'm speechless ... sincerely Jan |
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Re: Portrait Of Soul...
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by jaeann on
Tuesday, 5th August 2003 @ 03:47:20 PM AEST
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| i've got goosebumbs!!!! very sensually written!!! |
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Re: Portrait Of Soul...
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 5th August 2003 @ 10:04:27 PM AEST
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| Threre are no words to discribe what this does to my poor heart......you would have to look into my eyes to see how this poem and you effect me. Roses...every rose that ever bloomed at your feet |
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Re: Portrait Of Soul...
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 6th August 2003 @ 12:10:38 AM AEST
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| WoW! romantic and sooo beautiful!!! poetry at its finest:) hugs n' love nessa |
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