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Ill-Reflective Stare
Contributed by
jaeann
on
Monday, 4th August 2003 @ 01:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Poet needs her pain
standing blindly in the rain
nakedly bound in chains
justly gone insane.
Poet need her prose
before the door shuts closed
lost from hell appears a rose
can never tell friend from foe.
Poet needs her tears
shedding all her fears
debts accrue in arrears
hide from knowing leers.
Poet needs ner muse
nothing left to lose
broken and paid her dues
destination of refuse.
Paint a portrait
on the wall.
Watch her as
she slowly falls.
Make sure that
someone gets that call.
She was just
a poet.
That's all.
Copyright ©
jaeann
... [
2003-08-04 13:05:00]
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Re: Ill-Reflective Stare
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by squeesh on
Monday, 4th August 2003 @ 08:43:27 PM AEST
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I know how you feel. We all get depressed but hey we can also write about our problems. Hang in there. I hope you're feeling a little better about your life. I loved the poem, i could really relate.
~Squeesh |
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Re: Ill-Reflective Stare
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 4th August 2003 @ 10:20:50 PM AEST
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| i hope you are alright, it helps to write, stay well,Crow |
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Re: Ill-Reflective Stare
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by KJ on
Tuesday, 5th August 2003 @ 12:13:06 AM AEST
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| very nice piece, i very much so relate to it :) |
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Re: Ill-Reflective Stare
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by bobotheclown on
Tuesday, 5th August 2003 @ 08:07:26 PM AEST
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this was really good although I dont understand how the comment relates to the poem. I liked yer rhymes keep on writing. Once again an excellent poem.
Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: Ill-Reflective Stare
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 10th October 2003 @ 12:51:23 PM AEST
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| true true, me too, hugs n' love nessa |
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