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Bright Burns Healed
Contributed by
ericool_dude
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Monday, 4th August 2003 @ 10:25:00 AM in AEST
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there is something gently unsettling about radiant sunshine
the way it warms and burns
brightens and blinds
gives life to trees and animals and ferns
takes away in one fell drought
the elegant friend with a Cold heart
i prefer clouds
some mysteriouly beautiful
others Thunderous, Fearsome, and Loud
still others sit and lull
dark, forboding, dangerous, seemingly evil
until from them pulled
l o v i n g r a i n
r e f r e s h i n g n u r t u r i n g
c h i l l e d d r o p l e t s
the sullen Acquaintance with a gilded heart
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2003-08-04 10:25:00]
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Re: Bright Burns Healed
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by jaeann on
Monday, 4th August 2003 @ 04:39:42 PM AEST
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| the whole piece feels like warm rain falling |
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Re: Bright Burns Healed
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 6th September 2003 @ 08:01:43 PM AEST
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| I like your poem. It has such contrast between good and evil. It does feel like soft rain falling. It makes me think about things from both sides and how everything can't be completely good or completely bad; everything is always both. |
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Re: Bright Burns Healed
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 8th September 2003 @ 05:49:52 PM AEST
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| Clouds........ I love clouds. It's water in the sky for crying out loud! Mist gathered into big white blobs floating above our heads. I've had a fascination with clouds. You're absolutely right- from the dark, scary, dangerous gray clouds comes the most delicate thing- rain! Total metafor for life. Clouds......... gotta luv em' |
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Re: Bright Burns Healed
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by MnMnMsrcool on
Saturday, 4th October 2003 @ 11:42:19 PM AEST
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| i like this poem alot. it just flows from one thing to the next good job and keep writing |
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