|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
in twenty
Contributed by
lackadaisy
on
Monday, 4th August 2003 @ 08:25:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
|
Sad, losing time,
lost half the brain already.
Don't know if it's the left or right side,
Half from each side maybe.
Standing base not as supposed to be.
Feet bare, easily grazed.
Cramp soles
Stubborn toes
legs don't walk don't run don't go.
No more backbone,
Stoop and lean.
Clumsily break things,
and hands never clean.
Face as a moon with four corners.
Ears inside out.
Nose is useless.
Mouth too in that case.
Eyes, sigh
Always sleepless.
Lost the reasons one night,
what to do with a pair of scissors?
Too scared to stab at the eye,
hacked off the hair instead.
sad : eat chocolate
still sad : eat more chocolate
Actually
Maybe
Feeling a little better now..
Copyright ©
lackadaisy
... [
2003-08-04 08:25:00]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: in twenty
(User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on
Monday, 4th August 2003 @ 01:21:57 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| interesting poem, will look for more from you, and warm welcome to ypdc:) hugs n' love nessa |
|
|
Re: in twenty
(User Rating: 1 )
by Kimmie_mac on
Friday, 5th September 2003 @ 08:08:29 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
This is Good. I like it. Can't wait to see more of your work.
Kimmie_mac |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
