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there's a hole in my head
Contributed by
Cancer
on
Monday, 4th August 2003 @ 12:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
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there's a hole in my head
and the rain falls in
there's a hole in my head
and the blood pours out
there's a hole in my head
there's a gun in my hand
there's a hole in my head
it's the only way out
there's a slash in my wrist
i can see the bone
there's a slash in my wrist
tired of being alone
there's a slash in my wrist
i know you don't understand
there's a slash in my wrist
and a razor blade in my hand
there's a rope 'round my neck
and it's tied to a beam
there's a rope 'round my neck
i must wake from this dream
there's a rope 'round my neck
and a tear in my eye
there's a rope 'round my neck
so happy to die
there's an end to this pain
and it's coming up fast
there's an end to this pain
that i thought would always last
there's an end to this pain
that breeds and mutates inside
there's an end to this pain
and it is suicide
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2003-08-04 00:05:00]
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Re: there's a hole in my head
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by arthur1210 on
Monday, 4th August 2003 @ 01:50:08 AM AEST
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| damn, that's interesting...and dark. I appreciate the flow but not nessecerily the theme. Thanks for sharing |
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Re: there's a hole in my head
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 4th August 2003 @ 05:51:43 AM AEST
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i dont usually like suicide poems, but this one is touching and simply GR8
i really really liked it
GINA |
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Re: there's a hole in my head
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by tease_whizz on
Tuesday, 5th August 2003 @ 04:11:42 PM AEST
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| the repetition and rhythm are an effective way of communicating the steady demise of the human soul. your recent poems are definitely some of my favorites. Kate x |
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Re: there's a hole in my head
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by bobotheclown on
Tuesday, 5th August 2003 @ 07:25:00 PM AEST
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This was interesting and very captivating. I can't say I enjoyed it however to gruesome and dark for my liking. The repetition added to the mood of the poem.
Bobo (Joel) |
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