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Hover
Contributed by
CARAAAAA
on
Sunday, 3rd August 2003 @ 07:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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With the brusque briskness of atumn
combusting haughtily
leaving him ashen
blustering in a tepid kind of solitude
A fleeting wake of billowing flaming leaves
speckled and indefinate in shape
Like snowflakes irate and tempermental hovering down.
And now hes rummaging through insignificant things
to find that murky nefarious pool
of drowning
Better than grovelling through winter
Copyright ©
CARAAAAA
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2003-08-03 19:05:00]
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Re: Hover
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by hardcoreputa on
Sunday, 3rd August 2003 @ 08:01:41 PM AEST
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| you have a superb vocab, and the imegry in this poem is outstanding, i cant wait to read more of your poems, you have a great talent. ~Apryl |
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Re: Hover
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by venkat on
Tuesday, 5th August 2003 @ 05:14:31 AM AEST
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| no doubt..it is a talented write.. there is good imagery.. venkat |
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Re: Hover
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by The_Nameless_One on
Friday, 8th August 2003 @ 01:31:40 PM AEST
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| man you use the strangest words to describe the strangest things... do you give these things much deliberation or do you write them off the top off your head |
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