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Shh..
Contributed by
afraid_of_fear
on
Sunday, 3rd August 2003 @ 06:25:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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I’m dying again
My self is slipping away
I don’t know how to be
As the edges of my world begin to fray
(shh, no need to cry)
I no longer cry
I no longer feel
Cut my purest and let me
Heal
I want to die, I scream for death
Soon will be my final breath
(shh, it’s a secret)
Where is my love, my happiness
Only hidden far away
In my future that won’t be
The future I will never see
(shh, don’t worry)
Seal my eyes shut
So I can no longer
See the pain as I cut
Pain written in scars and blood
(shh, it won’t hurt you)
Take your artificial breaths
And breathe until you drown in
Your false air
(shh, it won’t happen to you)
(shh, I’m only pretending)
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2003-08-03 18:25:00]
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Re: Shh..
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by hardcoreputa on
Sunday, 3rd August 2003 @ 07:59:12 PM AEST
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| beautifully crafted, i love how you put those extra lines in with the (bracetts). wouldn't it be nice if we could just "seal our eyes shut" i feel your pain in this peice and i hope you are able to overcome it, for me the thoughts of suicide have never gone away, i find it easier to just live in the moment, and worry about the future later, i dont think that i will never cut myself again, just that i wont do it today, and i have gone 8 months without a suicide attempt. best of luck, if you need to talk im here. ~Apryl |
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Re: Shh..
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by xxmonstahxx on
Sunday, 3rd August 2003 @ 08:36:30 PM AEST
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| i feel your emotions in this poem.. very well described |
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Re: Shh..
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by bobotheclown on
Sunday, 3rd August 2003 @ 09:50:07 PM AEST
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this was really good... i don't know what to say 'cept that your not alone in yer feelings. This was very descriptive although I don't get the last line.
Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: Shh..
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by shelby on
Monday, 4th August 2003 @ 12:55:35 AM AEST
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such sadness you did a nice job with your feelings in this poem.
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Re: Shh..
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by BlackFire9786 on
Sunday, 10th August 2003 @ 10:00:54 PM AEST
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this is beautiful and so sad charlotte, i empathize, if you need to talk PM me
LOTZA LUV
Lisa |
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Re: Shh..
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by Queenie on
Wednesday, 13th August 2003 @ 07:56:22 PM AEST
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| A well written emotive piece. |
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