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If I Can't Believe You
Contributed by
MoonlitAngel
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Sunday, 3rd August 2003 @ 09:45:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Used to be, everybody came to me
No matter what was wrong
I wish I understood why you don't see
What they saw: that I'm strong
You know I'll always be here to listen
Don't leave me in the dark
Just because it's somewhere I haven't been
I too hear sorrow's mark
What's the point in me being here for you
If you won't let me in?
You always make me open up to you
While you fester within
Please stop hiding your true feelings from me
Who cares if I relate?
What's more important is your honesty
That you communicate
So maybe I won't understand; big deal
Wonder if you conceal
Constantly; if that's really how you feel
Just tell me something real
For me to ever take you at your word
I need to be able
To know that the sheer truth is what I heard
And not a false label
I want to be, need to be that someone
Your feelings, don't forbid
Blocking me out makes me feel like no one
I need to be needed
What it comes down to overall is trust
If I can believe you
'Cause if I can't, we're gonna bite the dust
So whatcha gonna do?
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MoonlitAngel
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2003-08-03 09:45:00]
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Re: If I Can't Believe You
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by PoloRM on
Sunday, 3rd August 2003 @ 11:16:52 AM AEST
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Truth is to be the most basic thing
For friendship, love or a wedding ring
But sometimes a lad has a tough time
And it's hard for him to admit his crime.
You should both sit down, talk and mime
Figure out problems of your love sublime.
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Re: If I Can't Believe You
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by hardcoreputa on
Sunday, 3rd August 2003 @ 12:45:18 PM AEST
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| i don't have any little poem for you, but a little advice. i think its important for him to come to you at times to talk and confide in you, but it might be better for him to talk to a different person, who might be able to understand him a little better... i know that everyone usually comes to me for help, and i get used to it, it makes you feel really great(at times) but i also know that i cant help everyone and sometimes they wont confide in me... i hope you aren't angry with this comment... i completely understand this poem and the way you feel... but yeah anyways this poem had awsome rymes and flowed beautifuly, lots of true emotion and a great structure... keep writting, ~Apryl |
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Re: If I Can't Believe You
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 3rd August 2003 @ 01:39:15 PM AEST
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| beautifully honest and written in a way as to touch all who read it, and, your right, being there for each other is so important:) hugs n' love nessa |
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