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Break Me
Contributed by
jacquelynne
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Sunday, 3rd August 2003 @ 03:45:00 AM in AEST
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Take my heart and break it
take my soul and shake it
take my mind distort it
take my life and keep it
I don't want it, I don't want you
you stole it all just left me bruised
I no longer feel, my wounds will never heal
so take, take my heart and break it
Copyright ©
jacquelynne
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2003-08-03 03:45:00]
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Re: Break Me
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by jaeann on
Sunday, 3rd August 2003 @ 03:54:51 AM AEST
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| i like it.....wish i could hear the music.... :) |
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Re: Break Me
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by vincy on
Sunday, 3rd August 2003 @ 01:31:14 PM AEST
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will have to breake it open to see what's inside
less you volunteer to pass over the sacret code. |
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Re: Break Me
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by hardcoreputa on
Sunday, 3rd August 2003 @ 02:04:51 PM AEST
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| i liked it.. you should post the song in its entirety~Apryl |
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Re: Break Me
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by venkat on
Monday, 4th August 2003 @ 02:17:24 AM AEST
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| an emotional write. venkat |
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Re: Break Me
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by Ramfire on
Sunday, 24th August 2003 @ 02:19:09 AM AEST
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A sad poem, jacquelynne.
Regards,
Ramfire |
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