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Uh Oh
Contributed by
jaeann
on
Saturday, 2nd August 2003 @ 10:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
dedicatedpoems
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Traveling along the insecure lines
ignoring all the tell tale signs
the attempts are always in vain
riding on a backwards train
kindred spirits never fade
turn away and pull the shade
never breaking silence free
always stuck in simply me
so, quickly run and hide
too many laws for me to abide
ignore with just a click
staying online is just a kick
I leave you now with my little quips
something for you to remember my hips
the gold glitter has long ago washed off
of my former days I sigh aloft
yet, I reach out once again in pain
waiting for me to go insane
by you.
Copyright ©
jaeann
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2003-08-02 22:35:00]
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Re: Uh Oh
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by shelby on
Monday, 4th August 2003 @ 01:43:03 AM AEST
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I love this poem I refer to myself as the untamed spirit lol!
Michelle |
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Re: Uh Oh
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 9th August 2003 @ 10:07:46 PM AEST
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| excellent poem, kindred spirits... something i say but more often than not hear soulmates, beautifully written:) hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Uh Oh
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by venkat on
Tuesday, 19th August 2003 @ 06:04:46 AM AEST
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| yeah,..an enjoyable poem. venkat |
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Re: Uh Oh
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by JamesStockdale on
Tuesday, 8th September 2020 @ 07:27:03 PM AEST
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Wow very nice,,,,,, below is killer
I leave you now with my little quips
something for you to remember my hips
the gold glitter has long ago washed off
of my former days I sigh aloft |
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