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Adair
Contributed by
Avarice_Riot
on
Saturday, 2nd August 2003 @ 09:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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Far from the healing circle
Reminiscing with a tombstone
Breathing in darkness
Scarred by the silence
Raping me with shadows of
Regrets and promises
Never to be fulfilled.
Loss remains the mourning theme
As corpse dust chokes my lungs
Bloodshot eyes refusing to believe
Ears subjected to the hollow
Tune of absence.
Alone, I must now retrieve the
Pieces you left behind.
No presence to comfort me
No one to tend to my musings
Only a cold, passive rock
In your memory
Tears swept away by anger
Lingering with every
Heartbeat of mine
Fragile, oh so fragile
This world without you
Erasing the pain
Only magnifies it
..that's how much you
were worth to me.
Copyright ©
Avarice_Riot
... [
2003-08-02 21:35:00]
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Re: Adair
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by Ronald on
Monday, 4th August 2003 @ 08:00:57 AM AEST
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| hey, I'm touched by this poem. Glad there's another Malaysian like me. Hope you'll keep submitting your poems in this website. I'm looking forward to read the next poem |
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Re: Adair
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Wednesday, 6th August 2003 @ 12:23:48 AM AEST
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Awww.. this is such a precious write....loved it... Keep them coming... let me welcome you to ypdc if I have't done so yet....
Jenni |
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Re: Adair
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by Qohinoor on
Saturday, 6th September 2003 @ 05:05:58 AM AEST
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| Hmmmm....very emotional work. What exactly happened? |
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Re: Adair
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 15th September 2003 @ 03:43:06 AM AEST
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| This is a fitting tribuate to your friend. I know how you feel going to his grave. I know how painful it is to see the headstone knowing they are now home. Hang in there. I promise the pain doesn't last forever, it only seems like it does. If you need someone to talk to pm me anytime. Beautiful poem. |
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Re: Adair
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by twinkletoes on
Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 08:26:26 PM AEST
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feeling this in my heart, beautiful and sad.
tt |
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Re: Adair
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 08:43:56 PM AEST
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| im so sorry for your loss; but this poem is a vivid timeless masterpiece, breathtaking:) hugs n' love nessa |
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