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Good-Bye

Contributed by suzy on Sunday, 11th August 2002 @ 04:42:50 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



Never thought you would just walk away
Didn’t think I would ever hear goodbye
I’m not going to beg you to stay
And you won’t see a single tear fall from my eye.

This time I’m going to be the strong one
My head will not fall and my back will remain straight
You won’t have the satisfaction of thinking you won
And you can’t fill my heart with that kind of hate.

I refuse to play the part of the fool this time
I refuse to let you use me over and over again
Don’t pretend you even care about what’s on my mind
Because no matter what you do you will never see the pain

Once you’re gone it’s forever
Remember that it’s always been your choice
You think you’re just so damn clever
I speak with my heart and you with your voice.

I think that’s been our problem all along
I was too emotional and you not enough
I won’t lie and say the feelings are gone
But you’ve forced me to be so rough.

So I guess sadly this is goodbye
Please don’t come around anymore
Letting go is tough and I really want to cry
But I can’t keep up the façade like I did before.




Copyright © suzy ... [ 2002-08-11 16:42:50]
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Re: Good-Bye (User Rating: 1 )
by George on Sunday, 11th August 2002 @ 08:34:48 PM AEST
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when one person in the relationship is working harder at it than the other, then its time to move on I think. It is hard to say goodbye but I think its time. Good luck.


Re: Good-Bye (User Rating: 1 )
by Chrissie on Wednesday, 14th August 2002 @ 02:45:56 AM AEST
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You convey your emotions very well in this Lasca.....a heartfelt, honest piece.
Chrissie x


Re: Good-Bye (User Rating: 1 )
by Patricia_Petro on Wednesday, 14th August 2002 @ 06:25:31 AM AEST
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Lovely poem, Lasca. Lots of raw emotion and full of sadness AND strength. You did a marvelous job conveying it.
~Patricia xx




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