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Tears of a thug
Contributed by
Criminal
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Saturday, 2nd August 2003 @ 05:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
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The original poem can be read here by the correct author.
http://web.archive.org/web/20020815224941/best-love-poems.com/poems.php?id=2196,
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Re: Tears of a thug
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by jaeann on
Saturday, 2nd August 2003 @ 05:26:12 PM AEST
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| wow...........very very real........you show your vulnerability so clear.......i hope she comes back to wipe away your tears........... |
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Re: Tears of a thug
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 2nd August 2003 @ 06:50:23 PM AEST
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| ohhh! this is soo moving and beautifully written, i hope your vision of forever with her comes true, ...and warm welcome to ypdc, i anticipate readin' more of your poetry, hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Tears of a thug
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by Criminal on
Saturday, 2nd August 2003 @ 09:15:14 PM AEST
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| Thank you. |
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Re: Tears of a thug
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 2nd August 2003 @ 09:15:30 PM AEST
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| Thank you. |
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Re: Tears of a thug
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 2nd August 2003 @ 09:15:32 PM AEST
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Re: Tears of a thug
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by bobotheclown on
Saturday, 2nd August 2003 @ 09:59:57 PM AEST
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Im on my knees and drowning in pain,
Im beggin for ya to please,
Dont let me die with my pain,
And let me not grieve
I loved this whole thing, but especially that stanza. You express yourself very well your poem was very vivid. I loved it keep on writing.
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Re: Tears of a thug
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Sunday, 3rd August 2003 @ 01:46:14 AM AEST
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Welcome to your-poetry.com...
This was so touching. You wrote it with so much emotion... Thank you for sharing your feelings with us. Hope things work out for you.
Looking forward to reading more of your work.
Jenni |
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