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Self-Performed Critique
Contributed by
norm
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Saturday, 2nd August 2003 @ 05:05:00 AM in AEST
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Picture, picture, on the wall,
am I short or am I tall?
I cannot see as others see me,
Do I look like Jimmy Cagney.
I get to wonder, if I blunder,
If my head's a simple dunder?
Know I not how look I be
Somehow I, of me, don't see.
This may sound a wee bit stilted,
For I may be a wee bit tilted,
I need not look at me and grunt
standing at the mirror front.
All females a dressing table
Have they not to make them able,
See themselves as GOD had made them
Douse themselves and then parade them.
How you look, a people puzzle,
Look ye grand and people nuzzle,
That's the aim of every person,
Love, be loved is life's immersion.
Copyright ©
norm
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2003-08-02 05:05:00]
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Re: Self-Performed Critique
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by PoloRM on
Saturday, 2nd August 2003 @ 05:30:27 AM AEST
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You really look like Norm...
Your kind of self-perfomed critique
I found to be very 'sympathique'
Your rhymes as always 'symphonique'
And your poem I title 'magnifique'.
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Re: Self-Performed Critique
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by Ilhar on
Saturday, 2nd August 2003 @ 09:40:24 AM AEST
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To me Dear Norm your best part
Is your most beautiful heart
So as the day goes shoot
I find you kinda cute
Shari |
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Re: Self-Performed Critique
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 2nd August 2003 @ 11:46:16 AM AEST
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dearest norm,
to me you look like a dear friend
and many days my heart you mend
with smiles and laughs and poetry
im happy your a friend to me:)
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Self-Performed Critique
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 2nd August 2003 @ 08:44:35 PM AEST
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tis' you dear Norm,who I see...
Only words in front of me.
And I love the Norm I do behold,
as often my words,have I told.
So look not in the daunting mirror,
Look within,it comes much cleraer!!!
Angel always....{{{Norm}}} godspeed! joni |
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Re: Self-Performed Critique
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 2nd August 2003 @ 08:45:23 PM AEST
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tis' you dear Norm,who I see...
Only words in front of me.
And I love the Norm I do behold,
as often my words,have I told.
So look not in the daunting mirror,
Look within,it comes much cleraer!!!
Angel always....{{{Norm}}} godspeed! joni |
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