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By Candlelight...
Contributed by
LovingWhispers
on
Friday, 1st August 2003 @ 11:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
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My sleep does not come easily
For in the loneliness of night
I lie awake for many hours
Thoughts of you,by candlelight
The missing deep inside of me
Holds me captive in its cry
I turn to face the window
And look out to the moonlit sky
I know you're out there somewhere
And I wonder if you're aware
That I lie here feeling so alone
In a bed that we should share
I think about the tenderness
In the way you speak my name
I smile through my endless tears
This missing holds no shame
One lonely satin pillow
Holds my every fallen tear
Another one lays empty
It is waiting for you here
I close my eyes and dream away
My hand reaches for your face
And for a precious tiny moment
I'm taken to another place
A place where there is you and I
And nothing in between
Somewhere that when I hold you
Isn't just within a dream
My love, I wait so faithfully
With hope inside my heart
That soon will come our special day
When we're no longer tides apart
As I lie here in the silence
Missing you all through the night
My only comfort comes from
Thoughts of you,by candlelight
Copyright ©
LovingWhispers
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2003-08-01 23:05:00]
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Re: By Candlelight...
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by stargazer on
Friday, 1st August 2003 @ 11:09:24 PM AEST
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| Absolutely amazing. Peotry is a form of expression and you expressed yourself very clearly. Beautiful! --- Amy |
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Re: By Candlelight...
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 1st August 2003 @ 11:22:15 PM AEST
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| oh sharon, this poem is so beauitiful, im all weepie now and wistful tooo, pooh, hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: By Candlelight...
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by PoloRM on
Saturday, 2nd August 2003 @ 12:36:00 AM AEST
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very lovely poem I really liked it and enjoyed reading it.
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That sweet poem reached down my soul
And I would guess that was your goal
Every night just hold on tight
And he'll come to you at candlelight. |
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Re: By Candlelight...
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by DreamWeaver on
Saturday, 2nd August 2003 @ 01:11:13 AM AEST
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| I feel your loneliness so much in this ... the frustration must be immense ... excellent write ... Jan |
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Re: By Candlelight...
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by Crow on
Saturday, 2nd August 2003 @ 01:49:53 AM AEST
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| you never fail to have my attention and touch my heart with your poems. Crow |
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Re: By Candlelight...
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by Ilhar on
Saturday, 2nd August 2003 @ 02:18:39 AM AEST
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Sharon, Another poem so full of love and the lonliness of distance, very touching hang in there I know you will be together
Shari |
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Re: By Candlelight...
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by jaeann on
Saturday, 2nd August 2003 @ 02:25:44 AM AEST
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| you express so deeply the loneliness you are feeling right now.......i hope you see his silhouette soon |
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Re: By Candlelight...
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by venkat on
Saturday, 2nd August 2003 @ 05:32:29 AM AEST
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| I agree with the comment of Dream weaver.. and this is amazing.. venkat |
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Re: By Candlelight...
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Saturday, 2nd August 2003 @ 06:44:34 AM AEST
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Whispers, this is so touching... very vividly said... I hope the wait isn't too long...
Hugs
Jenni |
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Re: By Candlelight...
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by Saira on
Saturday, 2nd August 2003 @ 07:01:13 PM AEST
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Such a beautiful poem...shows vivid colors of your loving emotions...I hope he comes to you and kiss away your loneliness real soon. Cheers!
Saira |
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Re: By Candlelight...
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by Rakerman1999 on
Sunday, 3rd August 2003 @ 01:16:54 AM AEST
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| ok fella's take 3 steps back 'cause this ones alllllll mine ;o) Roses at your feet |
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