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Broken
Contributed by
xxmonstahxx
on
Friday, 1st August 2003 @ 11:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Sitting in your room, I held you
as tears dripped from your eyes
sending shards of glass
ripping through my heart
with every sob digging deeper
cutting through muscle and tissue
with no remorse
I look beyond your eyes
and into your soul
where the open wound lies
dripping with blood, throbbing with pain
tenderly, I try to wash the hurt away
covering it with a blanket of my love
hoping someday it will be enough
to mend all that has been broken
Copyright ©
xxmonstahxx
... [
2003-08-01 11:05:00]
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Re: Broken
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by MoonlitAngel on
Friday, 1st August 2003 @ 01:42:54 PM AEST
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That's so beautiful... that's... wow. I don't even know what to say. That touched me deep inside, as corny as it sounds. Beautiful write.
~ Moonlit |
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Re: Broken
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by jaeann on
Friday, 1st August 2003 @ 04:51:10 PM AEST
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| i imagine that's a loved one caring for another loved one in a time of great sorrow..........you put words to how i would love to be taken care of |
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Re: Broken
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by PsychoticDreamz on
Friday, 1st August 2003 @ 09:55:58 PM AEST
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This is beautiful, how you can put this strong of love into words is amazing..Great visuals and descriptions.. Definately a powerful write..
-Psych |
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